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"Good [morning/afternoon],[Student’s Name],

I want to start by thanking you for the effort and dedication you put into your speech. It's clear that you've invested time in researching and preparing your ideas. You spoke with confidence, and you addressed the topic in great detail.

However, I noticed that your speech was a bit longer than what we were aiming for. While it's important to express your ideas fully, it's equally important to keep your audience engaged and respect their time. A well-structured, concise speech often has a stronger impact than one that is too long and may lose the attention of the listeners.

In the future, try to focus on the key points and avoid repeating information. Think about how you can convey your message in a more streamlined way. If you have a lot to say, consider breaking it up into smaller sections, so each point can be discussed clearly without overwhelming the audience.

Subjects

  • Urdu Pre-KG, Nursery-Grade 2

Experience

  • Shahi mohala fort road (Jan, 2008–Jan, 2021) at Lahore

Education

  • Secondary (Jan, 2008–Jan, 2021) from university of education, lahore okara campus renala khurd

Fee details

    Rs400–1,000/hour (US$1.44–3.60/hour)

    My fee transfer online jazzcash and easypiase

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